I recently discovered the website for Laura Purdie Salas and I’ve been exploring and experimenting with more poetry after making this discovery. If you haven’t visited Laura’s site, I encourage you to check it out. I was a little hesitant to write poetry, but other slicers, such as Christie Wyman, have inspired me to embrace my inner poet.
Today’s poem was based on a page about mask poems at https://laurasalas.com/mask-poem and I can definitely see using this with students.
Musings Of A Purse
You drop me, knock me around, and load me down with too much stuff.
Do you really need all of this?
I understand that you need a wallet and that device that tests your blood sugar.
I understand that you need your glasses in case your contact lenses get wonky.
I understand that you want to keep your bullet journal close.
However, do you really need twenty different pens?
And when is the last time you took out all of those receipts and organized them?
I’m stuffed with these strips of paper and let me tell you, those CVS receipts are something else!
I feel wrapped up like an Egyptian mummy after a trip to CVS!
At least, though, you haven’t carried your iPad this week.
Things get a little tight when you bring it along and I don’t have room to breathe.
I also wish that you didn’t put me on the floor.
Do you know how dirty floors are?
I prefer being placed (gently) in a chair or on a table.
And, if you wouldn’t mind, please wipe me off with one of those Clorox wipes every once in a while.
They make me feel so fresh and clean!
This is a great idea. My purse would have a similar conversation. I need half of the stuff in my purse. Thanks for sharing–it has inspired some creative writing when break is over.
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Thank you:)
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I always refer to my wife’s purse as her “luggage “. I know, insensitive male. But really, purses are a confounding concept.
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Oh, I agree with you! My current purse does resemble a piece of luggage! And every time I try to downsize or eliminate things, I tell myself that I just can’t do without whatever I’m trying to get rid of.
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This is delightful!! I am always trying to downsize… and when I do, of course, I need something I left behind. I love visiting Laura’s website. She shares so much good.
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Thank you:)
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Did you ever watch Seinfeld? George had a wallet in which he kept everything–every receipt, credit card, business cards, etc until it finally exploded one day. Purses really do act as a file cabinet. I like this strategy for poetry writing. Thanks for sharing it.
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I will have to check out that episode! That sounds like what I fear will happen to my purse one day!
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I love this poem! I could totally see and hear the character of the purse coming alive. By the way, I miss this evening in the writing group. Feel better!
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Thank you:) I hated missing the workshop! Today was much better! My head felt almost normal and I was able to enjoy the author visit at my school. Yesterday, though, was rough.
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I’m glad you are on the mend!
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This is great! I really enjoyed reading this mask poem. And…yes…you DEFINITLEY need 20 different pens.
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And most of the pens are InkJoy gel pens:)
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i laughed out loud at the 20 different pens! I have never counted them, but I am sure I’m up there too! I love Laura! She skyped with a summer writing group of elementary kids for two summers – she is so wonderful! You ought to try a riddleku – those are fun too!
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I will definitely try a riddleku! Thank you for the suggestion!
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